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Old 09-25-2012, 01:51 PM   #1
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Old 09-25-2012, 03:05 PM   #3
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I'll go first.

but an additional rule.
You can't flip my bars, meaning anything that is said within my rhymes you can't flip since i'm going first.


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Old 09-25-2012, 08:36 PM   #4
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lol, it's cool im not shadow bro....but total understanding on why you say that.
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lol, it's cool im not shadow bro....but total understanding on why you say that.
plz find 1 keystyle where i flipprd somebody's bars. I don't think it productive to back track on what somebody else said.

Don't take shots at me... if its in the rules and I accept i'll do it.
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Old 09-25-2012, 11:16 PM   #6
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raps are redundant kid, a wanna be jap who rhymes while doing jumping kicks
Your lines are more forced than Brett Favre passes into triple Coverage
Your spit bars that have little to no meaning and rhyme senselessly
Now you acting like a girl scared to go first...well your name does end in "Shi"
Kenshi is cruising for a bruising like a sea traveling masochist
He told me how bad he'd destroy me in rap...with his hand on his hip!
The landslide in my text will tremble your boots and cause you to break
Hey! it's not my fault....lines cause you to shake
How art thou part of the underground, everything there is worthless Shi
Never mind forget that last line, you fit the description perfectly
You're a black guy admiring samurais,he needs to find a clue
I'll stab your black ass and as you bleed to death demand you shine my shoes
You say your lines are immaculate, yet you're another simpleton bum
You couldn't be cold daze, if I somehow managed to get rid of the sun
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Duce u only gots 7 bawz.. add to mo linez
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Old 09-26-2012, 12:01 AM   #8
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I only need seven bars
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Old 09-26-2012, 12:33 PM   #9
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Let's see how do i pick apart a ***** that think he hood|
***** I'll break your **** till you can't comprehend ...understood?|

I'll lex logur this *****...break his face then sweep him up when I'm through wit this *****|
Me I'm on another level then you ..why are you trying...how do you think your bars can match up to me....how do you figure?|

But on some real ***** ****....Stepping to me....is like a one way ticket to your grave|
Now let me ask you this lets see if duce sees shells with them eagles flying over his waves|

***** I been on the killing and murdering always|
I'll kill you serve you and burn you in all ways|

Cuz ***** im a lyrical fiend i don't stop till your dead then ill shove you in a casket box|
****ing with me is like getting tha chicken pocks all over your head cuz my *****s is hawks|( get it?)

I feel like im losing my mind but ***** you can bring yo boys cuz i got tha toys that will go through *****s|
Fully loaded clips when im off a trip you don't really wanna see this **** that ill show you *****s|

***** you will feel like super man when you drinkin from my elixir|
But im tell you straight up ant nobody stopping this venom i will deliver|

My Lyrics like a crystal ball for my opponents see your fate|
Cuz I'll manly murder your misunderstood messages with no mistakes mate|
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Old 09-26-2012, 11:34 PM   #10
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Such a derogatory verse Kenshi lol.
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Old 09-27-2012, 12:07 AM   #11
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Duce gmv.... i was going to comment earlier but i didn't want it to seem like i was being bias.

Cursing don't make you cool.... unless you say with you chest lol.
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Old 09-27-2012, 12:22 AM   #12
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Duce gmv.... i was going to comment earlier but i didn't want it to seem like i was being bias.

Cursing don't make you cool.... unless you say with you chest lol.
I'm sorry but that's a lame reason to vote against him lol.

Kenshi gets my vote, I feel like his style is different and it works in battle.
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I'ma say some serious ****....***** if you going to diss me....quit talking about **** like you got somebody's management all in yo mouth... Ring Pop???? smdh...an you think you at the top of the rap game....




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Old 09-27-2012, 12:28 AM   #14
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I'ma say some serious ****....***** if you going to diss me....quit talking about **** like you got somebody's management all in yo mouth... Ring Pop???? smdh...an you think you at the top of the rap game....




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No disrespect to kenshi but his verse didn't even rhyme 0_o
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I'ma say some serious ****....***** if you going to diss me....quit talking about **** like you got somebody's management all in yo mouth... Ring Pop???? smdh...an you think you at the top of the rap game....

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So like i feel so accomplished over the fact that my line went way over your head. Its okay i had to break it down for NOFL too. Dude i don't think Im the best. i use weak ass punchlines i make up from the ish in my room like checkers. If. you wanna do a bar by bar comparison. then duce has got you man.

Only reason why duce should lose this round if he does is because he didn't follow the bar min.

Edit: Yo duce a fool loooooooool he said no disrespect. omg Im dying man welcome back.... again.
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So like i feel so accomplished over the fact that my line went way over your head. Its okay i had to break it down for NOFL too.
Why are you bringing me into this though?
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raps are redundant kid, a wanna be jap who rhymes while doing jumping kicks
Your lines are more forced than Brett Favre passes into triple Coverage
Gud. Racist tho.

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Your spit bars that have little to no meaning and rhyme senselessly
Now you acting like a girl scared to go first...well your name does end in "Shi"
Kenshi is cruising for a bruising like a sea traveling masochist
He told me how bad he'd destroy me in rap...with his hand on his hip!
The landslide in my text will tremble your boots and cause you to break
Hey! it's not my fault....lines cause you to shake
Gud imagery. Personals, wordplay. Got jokes.

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How art thou part of the underground, everything there is worthless Shi
Never mind forget that last line, you fit the description perfectly
You're a black guy admiring samurais,he needs to find a clue
Lol, what? Random. Not feeling any of this. But the last line at least flowed into the next one...

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I'll stab your black ass and as you bleed to death demand you shine my shoes
I know everybody's got to do one murderdeathkill line, but eh. Didn't do much for me. Dunno.

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You say your lines are immaculate, yet you're another simpleton bum
You couldn't be cold daze, if I somehow managed to get rid of the sun
I got it, but a weak ending all the same. Not at all strong.


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Let's see how do i pick apart a ***** that think he hood|
***** I'll break your **** till you can't comprehend ...understood?|
Gud. But not very complex.

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I'll lex logur this *****...break his face then sweep him up when I'm through wit this *****|
Me I'm on another level then you ..why are you trying...how do you think your bars can match up to me....how do you figure?|
It rhymes, but I wished you continued with where the story was going, you have a visual established from Lex, hold that train of thought before moving on.

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But on some real ***** ****....Stepping to me....is like a one way ticket to your grave|
Now let me ask you this lets see if duce sees shells with them eagles flying over his waves|
Don't actually know what the filtered words are here. Again, each line in the bar is nice, but paired with the other...they don't go together. Yes, they rhyme, but don't paint a complete picture.

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***** I been on the killing and murdering always|
I'll kill you serve you and burn you in all ways|
Eh...the random 'Immakillyerass' line. We all tend to do it, but be creative at least.

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Cuz ***** im a lyrical fiend i don't stop till your dead then ill shove you in a casket box|
****ing with me is like getting tha chicken pocks all over your head cuz my *****s is hawks|( get it?)
No, I didn't get it. :[

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I feel like im losing my mind but ***** you can bring yo boys cuz i got tha toys that will go through *****s|
Fully loaded clips when im off a trip you don't really wanna see this **** that ill show you *****s|
Not feeling it.

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***** you will feel like super man when you drinkin from my elixir|
But im tell you straight up ant nobody stopping this venom i will deliver|
Superman is a positive, tho. You gun make him feel gud? :[ I don't understand the image you're painting. It's incomplete.

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Cuz I'll manly murder your misunderstood messages with no mistakes mate|
Your finish is also weak like Duce's.


Okay, so, as you can tell, Duce gmv. I broke down why but it boiled down to Duce's being more coherent, really. He told a more cohesive story.

Kenshi, most of my breakdown of your verses was constructive criticism on storytelling and a need for complexity. (The alternative is to be beautifully simple, but brutal, funny, and relatable to all members - so even if it's grade school, they get it...) Use what you can in the crit, discard it if you want. Just my opinion. (Taking what I say to heart could be positive or negative...I just realized you have another round...sorry. I ain't trying to mess with your head/style. :[ )

Btw, I could make out which curse words were which most of the time, and then others I couldn't. The downside to using obscenities on a forum with a filter...you should've accounted for that by either not using those words, or for f*** sake, leave one letter (not mad, just making an example.)

If this was a freestyle, on mic, your piece would've been better. All the aggression would translate into your voice, etc.
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Cuz ***** im a lyrical fiend i don't stop till your dead then ill shove you in a casket box|
****ing with me is like getting tha chicken pocks all over your head cuz my *****s is hawks|( get it?)




I'll explain that verse what im saying is for example the Fing with me is like getting chicken pocks all over your face Ok think of guns Red Dots Lasers when someone wants to shoot you in the face with a laser attachment to a gun.

cuz my *****s is hawks


My N.....s is Hawks Hawks is another meaning for Sniper

get it now?
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Cuz ***** im a lyrical fiend i don't stop till your dead then ill shove you in a casket box|
****ing with me is like getting tha chicken pocks all over your head cuz my *****s is hawks|( get it?)




I'll explain that verse what im saying is for example the Fing with me is like getting chicken pocks all over your face Ok think of guns Red Dots Lasers when someone wants to shoot you in the face with a laser attachment to a gun.

cuz my *****s is hawks


My N.....s is Hawks Hawks is another meaning for Sniper

get it now?
Your starting to sound like latios now.. explaining the line you thought was the hottest bar like we didn't get it the 1st time. Even if we was just realize what you meant that 1 line is not going to drastically change our opinion.
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Your starting to sound like latios now.. explaining the line you thought was the hottest bar like we didn't get it the 1st time. Even if we was just realize what you meant that 1 line is not going to drastically change our opinion.
TFist said he didn't get it, so he told him. It's not like he said "I won because of this" or latios's ever so famous "This was my best bar thus far" lol.
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Aye.

I get it now, but here's the thing, if people don't get your bars, then you need to make sure they do in the first place.

I say people. I assume everyone else got it, and it was just me. Assuming it was just me, hey the line could be fine, and Kenshi did a good job with it.

If more people than me missed the visual, then that's an area Kenshi can improve on: making sure readers get what he says.
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Lmao my bad kenshi. I take it back
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